Describe a time when someone’s words had a lasting impact on you.

 On time that someones words had a lasting impact on me was last year when I opened up to my aunt about my mental health struggles. It was very had for me because I feel like in general it's not something we talk about much in my family, and when I have before with my mom it was basically just forgotten the next day. She actually listened and understood what I was saying, which made me feel a lot better.

Today in class we praticed reconginzing mistakes in peoples claims.

Doing this assignment has helped me be able to understand what to look for when revising my own writing.

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